https://www.strangehorizons.com/reviews/2009/05/living_with_gho.shtml

Her comments on magic, are, I think, perfectly fair. I find magic hard to write. SO, if anyone is interested, there's a 'Questions about Meraafi and Magic' open thread on my live journal (https://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/154202.html)